Olympus Intro I made

[Watermelone 168]

Hey I made this today since Im creating some videos for Olympus, and it was kinda quickly done so its no perfect but take a look and tell me what you think. Ill accept all feed back, dont be shy, then depending on what you guys say I can recreate it or leave it.

 

[Lethals Loaded 1224]

I was expecting more then smoke and a fading in logo =[

 

Still looks good doe! =D

[Vancey 167]

I like the only thing you could change is move the smoke down to the bottom, and when the logo is fading make the music fade to but other than that man it looks great!

[Jorbis 327]

Jpeg has got the right idea, when you're fading in a clip such as an intro you should fade everything at once. The music, smoke and the olympus logo in this case. 

 

Hopefully one of your intros will be apart of the other video you're creating??!?!? 

[Muthinator 3064]

Should put APD, R&R and News crew vehicles or helicopters going through the smoke as the music kicks up!

[Watermelone 168]

Alright guys, ill leave this over night wait for any more feed back and ill see what I can do thanks! and I dont wanna have to much stuff flying everywhere it just looks to much of an eyesore i like sorta simple but we'll see what happens

If theres anything you think I can add that wont be to "unprofessional" looking but could possibly make it more exciting?