APD Hatchback Design

[Lantik 133]

I made a potential design for the apd, I want honest feed back and if you guys think olympus should consider adding the design or not! (on Olympus it would be more matte than glossy) 

https://imgur.com/sLcbc2A

https://imgur.com/0Q9H4Ml

PS: if it got approved the APD logo would go on the hood and the side with the Olympus logo on the back bumper potentially

[GregoV1 981]

[Lantik 133]

1 minute ago, Grego said:

I def am serious so i am all ears

[Venomm 2244]

Honest feedback, looks to cartoony.
Try to keep everything flowing in one direction, the color scheme and the lines overall just dont match

PM me on discord or here if you want help/tips tho

[LULA 2022 - PT 13 495]

What you did good;

you seem to have line arrangement down

Simple color scheme

What you did bad;

Too "Cartoony" specifically the font. In a grey car I'd say you should use white text or a complementary color that stands out instead of black, you type also has the pt value at or above one, if you're going to color both the fill and the outline the maximum you should use is .5 pt.

The stripe also has rough edges, looks like it was made using the paintbrush tool, IDK what program you use but if it's an option use the pen tool, it's tricky to learn but once you get the hang of it you can make very staight lines like these https://gyazo.com/639c54038ccc34851cf05a401daaef00 

Recognition: The design doesn't immediately strike me as a police car and the text is unreadable until you get close, the reason black and white works is because it's recognizable without details from afar and most people have been exposed to black and white police cars. Make the police text more prominent and sleeker or slap a badge on it so if a noob sees it they can instantly go "that's a cop car" without getting up close. A well done example of a grey cop care is TPS https://imgur.com/a/n0WDuUh

Detail; The car lacks personality, without an agency patch or any markings besides "police" it looks like it could've been ripped from any mod pack and thrown in, make a car with personality. Add small details like a flag or a bumper sticker a unique slogan, even shading can be what makes it distinctive but no one wants a completely generic car.

 

Overall for a first shot at designing it's not bad, the stuff I was making when I started was much worse and no one's born knowing everything or proficient at something like texture design. Just don't put in on a designer app because while a cool concept it needs a lot of TLC before it's ready. 

[Masonn 2860]

You can see the lines don't line up on the bottom you have to break the line as the way the template it it creates the misalignment.

I personally feel like there was too much effort put in here since i feel like these are easy things to spot and correct. When I made my my first hatch design with lines i spent the time working out how to get them to line up when in game other than just on the design 

[mcfradio83 1]

Shit tier

[ThatNerdyGuy 5916]

I like what we've got already.

[Maddox 675]

decent

[Y A Y O 235]

Better than I can do but I like what we already have